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just different 1 min read 602 views Jun 26, 2014

Shiftless ways

steps going somewhere

up or down there

tread on by those

going no where

the only thing living

up there is some hair

in follicle tissues

brain matter and so many

diabolical issues

falling to deaths throne

thrown from peace alters

not known to reach the top

from the bottom

looking down

trough tunnel vision

hyped up on television

arrested development

filled with sugary aliments

looking for a ladder to climb

a few steps up from a jump

up off the ground

still they stay down

 

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