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life 1 min read 796 views Jun 28, 2014

Treading Water:

Trying to stay a float in this life seems hard to do,

when you feel like you have the weight of the world

on top of you.

You try to do all you can to make things in life better,

but your stuck in the same spot all the wasteless effort.

Barely holding on to your  sanity, sovereignty, and dignity,

You keep hopeing things would turn out differently.

You can barely keep your head above the water,

sometimes you wish this life, you could alter.

 

Inspired by a friend..

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scash102

Word... Great poem

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tretre

Thank you Scash!! Glad you like it. Thank you for taking time out of your busy day to read my poem. Keep that pen movin Scash!!

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