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life 1 min read 616 views Jul 9, 2014

Pact of a Broken Soul

Break your pact

battle remains still

innocent blood stains the ramparts

Halls of the powers filled with gold

wrought by others invain

disdain peering through rightious hypocrites

the rightness of wrong doers

versus

the wrongness of the do gooders

it is not always as it seems to be

who decides what is!

who decides what is not!

uncaring hearts

refuse to accept oneness

It's about me

Just the me's out there

are eternally lonely!

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