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A Long Time Ago

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Way back when

when we were still cool

Way back when

please don't be fooled

I'm not reminiscing

back on the good times

i can only think of

when you crossed that line

It feels like just yesterday

we were side by side

and now we meet again

with all these good vibes

But i don't know if i can trust you

even if we take it slow

i should leave it where it lies

a long time ago...

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Wize Dom says:

Smooth flow and clear message.

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