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Your words

hit me hard 

like bass at festivals

i always stand right beside the speakers

there are no words

no sound or body language

could explain how it feels

overheating at my core

while experiencing chills

thrills 

like rollercoasters

you speak loops into my life

watching my back

staring at it with a knife

I don't know what you'll do with me

I only know your words

you say you care 

but what does that infer

will it always be ok

and may we always be grand

literal fans of one another

if i say my words that's the plan

so I hope you don't think 

that it is TOO absurd

that i ask what you meant

when you said your words 

 

 

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LP45 says:

Nice.

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