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romance 2 min read 533 views Sep 2, 2014

Masquerade

Feeling like theres something

Looking like its nothing 

Lust, Love, Just a "Forget" YOU? 

Maby im just to crazy in my head, and maby your are too. 

I dont know what i felt 

Thought maby you could help 

Guess im just ***ed oh welp

Can I get a sign 

Na bump that im just fine 

Say you want all these things 

Looking for a girl to give the ring 

What you go after 

Theres no next chapter 

All they see is your Ambition 

They give you some attention  

But as soon as it gets rough 

She leaves you standing in the dust 

Then you always run to me 

Sayin how could she how could she 

I tell you she wasent special anyways 

She was just trynna get payed 

Couldent handle the lifestyle 

She couldent even walk a mile 

For you i just pray you dont figure it out to late 

And in saying this I hate 

But im not gunna wait 

Got my own life to live 

Somethings gotta give 

Were both afraid 

Its a dman shame 

So i guess well just keep pretending 

That theres nothing happening 

Both wishishing deep inside 

What were trynna hide 

Its so obvious

But were both obvlious 

We makein ourselfs that way 

Cause hey 

This seems to good to be true 

and we both knew 

That nothing last forver 

Time to break the teather 

Go further than we ever did before 

Regaurdless of what happens you deseirve more

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jevans1194

You be bout to make me cry.

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justformine

This one tho still hurting -_-

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