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life 2 min read 478 views Sep 2, 2014

Which way?

Alwaays late night thinkin 

With my hopes always dreamin 

From my invetibul fate

LIFE, Im just trying not to break 

They say change how you livin 

Right now you a villian!

Ok.... did that. Got on the right track

Now what do I get back?

A clear concence? 

What im suposto do with that nonsencce 

Can I take it to the bank?

Whats gon help my mama I GOTTA THINK.. 

Wokin a 9-5 yeah thats fine

But now you behind on the bills

Once you got out thats when it got really real

Keep trynna make life better

But everyones always complaning about chedder 

I wanna live my life right

I get so close I feel like I just might

Something always pulls me back

Right back to this shieeet sack

Ive never belonged

Been wanting to leave all along

Doin this since I was a jit

Its just my out let

No real deal type shieeeat

Just something to get me though the day 

Insted of making someone else pay

All thsi from my head

I really dont wannna be dead

But sometimes I feel like i am 

Just going thought the motions cause I can

MaryJane always lends a helping hand

She picks me up, but always lets me back down

After that I frown

But I can blame her 

I already knew nothing last forever 

 

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jevans1194

Bruhh you gotta make this into song

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love_supreme

Very nice

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