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life 1 min read 508 views Sep 2, 2014

Snakes

Always thinking of what life could be 

How it should be 

Dont know why I cant express myself

Its not good for my mential health 

I guess its a defence mecknisim 

Against all the critizsum 

Really senstive 

But youll never know it 

Learned that way back in the day 

Before I ever got payed 

Cant let them see you weak 

'&&dont ever over speak 

Learn to listlen and obserive 

Retain and perserive 

Even when you do let them in 

Dont jus go start treating them like kin 

People gotta earn that Sheieet 

Or else youll be the misfit 

Left to rot and sit 

Just becase you thought they was real 

But now its to late they ran and squelled 

Guess who hhas to deal? 

Atleast youll be getting three square meals 

 

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