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life 1 min read 508 views Sep 5, 2014

Is it dreams or nightmares?

Run up in your house 

Quite as a mouse 

Take all yo ish 

Then hit your bish 

With my AK

Better hope ion spray 

Like I do on them crackas 

They already know im faster

Hollywoods most wanned 

Now im locked up so I get taunted 

That street life aint where its at 

That life you livin by the gat 

It aint cool 

Youll just end up in a pool... 

Of blood 

And all they gon do is shrug 

Way to many thugs 

They children aint gettin no hugs 

This world is ruthless 

Crackheads walkin about toothless

Me.. I just wanna be somebody 

Not just anybody 

Respect is what I disire the most 

Best beleive thats what I'll get before I croke 

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