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romance 2 min read 603 views Sep 5, 2014

Cant' take it.

Mix signals 

Thats all I ever get 

Maby I forget 

To try and think like you 

But thats no true 

Its on my mind 

All the time 

They way you make me feel 

It couldent possibley be real 

Honestly I feel pethetic 

I could never come out and say it 

So how would I ever know 

But this fear of regection too strong 

I'll just replay this love song 

And imigane it was me 

That turned us into a we 

I dont know if this is the right part 

But you deffently messing with my heart 

I can see it in your eyes 

Or maby thoes are just mine in disguise 

Wish I had a rule book 

On how to catch you on the hook 

Im just to sceard of the worst 

I think they put me on a curse 

Forced to walk the world alone 

No one at home 

Maby my struggle is supposed to help 

But if you put me on the burner then I will melt 

If I comes down to it im able to take the heat 

But after it all im so weak 

Just my mind state 

Nothing you'll be able to see and that I hate 

Cause I know if I could trust you 

We'd be the perfect two

Your tired of getting hurt 

But whats worst 

Is all this regret and what If's 

Promised myself I'd stop this 

For the most part I did 

Stood up and faced my problems before I woulda hid 

Once you throw emotions into the mix 

Heartbreak is always the risk 

I just dont know if I can handle that 

The greatest attack 

See i've been through the worst 

Should be ina hurse 

On my way to the grave 

But I got saved 

So nothting really phases me 

Cause I always come out stronger see

But Heart break 

Yeah. Thats one thing I deffently cant not take 

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