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romance 1 min read 540 views Sep 25, 2014

Ugh

My fear of rejection

It has total hold within

How will I ever feel complete

Wiping silent tears with my sheet

I just want you to know

But I'm not that bold

What if the feelings not mutual

You know the ritual

You'll act like its nothing

When it's honestly everything

How am I ever gunna love

Not even just you, but I can feel it in your hug

There's something there

I ain't no square

I know what I feel

And this is real

It could be fake

Here's my heart you can take

I don't care anymore

I'm tired and your girl is a hoe

I'm done

Let me just run

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