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Manly Advice

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My son,

 

Flee from the woman who fears

the passing of years,

and views the aging of one's face

as the loss of comeliness.

 

She is high maintenance,

and will betray your love

for the accolades of flattering tongues -

for her love of herself is founded

on the adoration of others

and as their numbers dwindle,

so too, will her self-esteem.

 

She will bring misery to your days

and futility to your nights,

and will cause you to jump through rings of flame

like a trained dog to prove the love

she feels increasingly less worthy of

through the passage of time.

 

In this pursuit you shall lose your ever-loving mind

and all semblance of sanity.

 

But the woman who welcomes her years is your blessing.

 

She is grateful for every one she lives to see.

 

For she is storing up the wisdom

gleaned from years past,

and her maturing eyes will still shine

with the glint of fondness

for your familiar face

and will still cherish your embrace.

 

She is not easily charmed by flattery

carried on voices other than yours.

 

Yes, the most beautiful of women at any age

is one who is secure.

 

She is to be sought out.

 

For her lack of insecurity is your prize.

 

Be wise

 

and cherish her, my son.

 

-HymnAgen

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mrmelody7 says:

Proverbial Wisdom-Proverbs my favorite Book
 

DallasCowgirl says:

Definitely something that I would expect King Solomon to proclaim. Wise, this is indeed. I love it. I need to print this out and put it on a wall, foreal!

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hymnagen says:

That is certainly the vibe I was aiming for. That You felt it,too, is validating. Thank you, both.
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Charles2 says:

Laser sharp vision... Well execution

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hymnagen says:

Appreciate you saying so, Charles2. Thnx

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CAMYIELLE says:

I just happened to be blessed by your poem hours before my 46 birthday. It just really spoke to my heart! I am grateful you chose to share this! Thank you

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