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life 1 min read 634 views Sep 30, 2014

BOW

Im lost dont know where im headed

Just trynna pay all my dues that are debeted

I miss my n***a jay

I just wanna hear him say hey

Locked in a cell

I know to him it feels like hell

I aint been writing like i should

I would if i could

Gotta do for my people who cant

To gether we stand

If we aint got eachouthes back

Someone gon get us w. That gat

I promise you that

My loyalty runs deep

Out my mouth ypu wont ever hear a peep

Just the sound of me creep

Thatll be the last thing you hear

My face you'll see in the rear

Over my peoples i really do not care

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