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kelly

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first love

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Kelly is just trying to find her place

She trys a diffrent pace

She just wants what is the norm

Flicks people off when they honk their horn

Dont rush her

Let her make it known shes sure

For a hurt soul there is no cure

Except a pasient heart

One that wont part

After time

Still have the same love in their eyes

Someone who will work with her issues

Be right there when she finlly breaks down with a tissue

Just knowing shell have some on to talk to

When all her issues seem too new

Someone jist to be there

And show her they care

To know she makes an impact

Not just cause she stakes her own racks

Someone to look past all the rumors

She treats them like humor

Dosnt take none of it to heart

She accepts her past but she made a restart

And if ypur foolish enough to let the past tarnish what is in frount of you

My dude your a crazy fool

You have a girlfriend

But know kelly has been riding and will till the end

Youve seen kelly grow

Even when she was acting like a hoe

Nothing but love and acceptece did you show

Now you both feel something more

But your hearts to sore

And you know shes so gaurded

How are you supposto get this started?

Youve put your self out yhere with her before

But come on my man what were ypu doin it for

Just to get in her pants

She saw right through your plan

Just politey declined

No hate in her eyes

Played it real chill

Most feamles wpuld tripped and killed

Come on you have a ***in dimond in the rough

Yes ofcourse getting her will be tough

Not because she has so many other guys

But because she has self worth in her eyes

You cant play her like these outher girls

Batt your eyes make their stomics swirl

Shes seen it all before

Kelly actually has a brain unlike these other hoes

If you cant see that

Then ypu dont deseirve to come up to bat

And if ypu do see it

But know you jist trynna hit

Then your deffently not worthy

Kelly loves ypu to death says im sorry

But i cant wait my whole life for you

Lace up these new shoes

And run off if not together

Kelly will stand this lonly weather

All making her stonger

For a better father

Ist that the eternal goal

For a fmaily with a home

Imma be like kelly

And not worry about these dudes really

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2b2b2 says:

Great Share.....Bravo....ONE
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hymnagen says:

I'm a dude who's been through this with someone before. You really captured the complexity of it. Well done

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kavindra says:

I think this would make a great story! However ,"but know you just trying a hit" maybe could add the word(that) at the end of this line.

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