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romance 2 min read 808 views Oct 10, 2014

Girl Pick your head up

Girl pick your head up erase them thoughts look at me

Your intellgent, classy, and funny as hell cant you see?

I know your lonley

You want that guy but he keeps calling you homie

He needs saving tho

And your no pro

You can barley keep your head above water

With him as an ancor itll just make it harder

Yeah your what he needs

And you would like a little seed

But he aint right for you

This is fate stepping in telling you who not to choose

Keep focousing on your self

They gon regret it when they relize you just wanned to help

Forget them/ him

Dont commit to a life full of sin

Watch from afar

You the only one of ypur friends ridin round in a car

So much potential

And to prove yourself did it without credentials

One in a million

Buddie over there trippin

He dont know how he feels

Claming that hes so real

But cant even admit to himself

He scared cause he knows ypu can take care of your self

Know you dont need him

You knwo you just want him

Thats where they get intimidated

Knowing you dont need him to make it

You need a king

Not just some n***a thats gunna give ypu a ring

You need an equal

This dude is just a sequel

Of your past

His type you already had

Figure yourself out first

Once you do that none of this will hurt

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hymnagen

Nice piece of encouragement. Well done

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Justformine

Thank you :D

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2b2b2

Superb Work....ONE...thanks for sharing!

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kavindra

respect yourself ! know who you are, learn to like yourself, can't love till you love yourself ! I love the message this piece conveys! well done!

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