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long distance 1 min read 387 views Nov 19, 2014

Blaze Glory

There on Neptune I chill,

You behind me pacing back and fourth under pressure,

I can feel my vibe disintegrate piece by piece,

Being alone at this point would let me free,

Trying not to drown under water at high levels,

Man why both of my eyes have different color motion patterns,

It's like being in heaven and scaryreality at the same time,

I can feel my high vibe drop even more,

She still won't calm herdown,

I can barely remember any good memories,

Maybe those are the good moments swift in with the bad times,

I think I'm about to drown now,

Damn if she just could've stayed calm I wouldn't have drowned and died,

Being put back here through a dark force...,

Into reality,

What's scarring her to be under pressure...

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