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The Burden Bearer

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And here I stand,

An old man burdened by the lessons of time

I find

Myself in a mood...

 

Reflectin on all my victories

Though many defeats (weeps)

My feet

Are so weary

Losing the strength to eat.

Withering away like a flower

Like when the winter sets in

The power

Of time overwhelms all men.

 

Reminiscing on sins since forgotten

Rotten

Is this apple, preach!

Can you believe the reach of this tree?

Me spreading my seed as far as the eye can see.

Leaving an impression on the world

How will you remember me?

 

As a villian? (sigh)

Well I'm a hero to someone...

And it matters not the label

All the alike must fall.

 

The beauty of life

Is that it all comes to an end.

The tragedy of life

Is we end where we begin.

 

Born from someone else's pain

Created from the Earth.

Live in pain

Why must life's lessons hurt?

Someone else carries our pain

That FEELING (give me a moment) when we lower the corpse into the dirt...

 

Well allow me to alleviate your burden

Because surely these curtains must close,

And before you toss that final rose

Upon this shifting stage

My final act,

Is to be born within you.

 

So you don't have to carry my pain alone.

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COMMENTS

 

catmartan says:

Awesome Write !
 

athomas says:

I like , very nice write :)
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The Immortal Wize says:

Touching!

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hymnagen says:

Helluva write. Strong reflective piece.
 

ceetaylor says:

Thanks a lot, I really appreciate your time.

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