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Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way

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Never Crossed The Line

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I won’t lie and deny

that Becky’s turned my head

a few times since she’s been fed

that fried chicken and corn bread,

but Becky can’t relate

to the being of my state

‘cause she has never faced the hate

my people carry like dead weight.

 

See, my sista’s thunderous thighs

and glutes set up on high

without stilettos caught my eye

and held my heart then never let go

when I was a youth.

So if the devil is a liar,

then my sistas are the truth,

'cause they know my trials intimately.

See, we share roots.

 

Now Minister Farrakhan

seems to believe

they fattened their daughters

to feed our disorder –

deepening our self-hatred

every time Becky gets naked

and displaces one of our Queens

like its all a diabolical scheme,

and I believe it.

 

Not a day goes by

that I don’t hear or read sh!t

about another famous brotha

and his new Caucasian lover –

making some of my sistas feel

like they’re on the outs.

Like they might die

never knowing the love

of a devoted spouse.

 

So I’ve never crossed the line,

nor invested my precious time

attempting to sex the

female offspring of my oppressor,

and I ain’t inclined to accept her

offerings if any Queen

let’s my choices affect her self-esteem

in a negative way.

Nah mean?

 

- HymnAgen

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Charles2 says:

Demons are real energetic spiritual influences formed of our conscious desire. we feed them breed them, suffer from their influence and have to develope the will to defeat them. interesting way to look at this type. nice write
 

DallasCowgirl says:

See, I wasn't going to even say anything. But this poem is (excuse my un-lady-likeness) f*cking superb. This is probably the realest piece that has struck a chord with me in some time. Completely on point, big bro. Loved every part of it! *Snap snap* for the brothas that will never feel the desire to cross that line.

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hymnagen says:

"All things are lawful for me, but all things are not expedient: all things are lawful for me, but all things edify not." Just because I can doesn't mean I should, especially if it makes my sista feel some kinda way. Thanks for these kind words Charles2 and underhiswings7!
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KingQadarDwon' says:

This is truly outstanding and magnificent.. Definitely YAH approved... I definitely can relate.. The Becky's never peaked my interest, always knew something was missing.. Thanks for sharing brother... Write on..
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2b2b2 says:

Ha Ha....Most Excellent HymnAgen, speaks loudly to you stature, I have always seen in your writes....Salutes

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hymnagen says:

KingQadarDwon', 2b2b2 you insights and acknowledgement are received with much respect and gratitude. Peace, brothas!

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