KingQadarDwon'

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life 1 min read 728 views Mar 17, 2015

Penetrated by words

I really could, if I really wanted, I can have you nuttin like it wasn't nothing, all mental no touching, brain penetration, your thoughts erupting, spots getting touched with my words, my verbs caressing them curves, my nouns playing with your nerves, my adjectives substituting your slurs, got you feeling all godly, all superb, now you feeling yourself, you like how I'm stroking them words. Ain't that the nerve of me?!, To have you soaking in your own creek, got you thinking about tomorrow, how you plan on digging up starfishes and enjoying your own beach. King Qadar Dwon'

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twistedbeauty

well done sir

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KingQadarDwon'

Thank you..... Appreciate ya..

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DallasCowgirl

I love this, ahch

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KingQadarDwon'

Todah ahchut.... I'm happy you read it..

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