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life 1 min read 775 views Mar 21, 2015

Fatherless/save our sons

We need the protection of our daddies, but we keep losing them to the streets or just keep getting abandoned and it's very saddening, we never done him nothing to make him to start running, just because he had a few fights with momma he started acting like a women, it was your job to protect us, and when we started to fall you was supposed to catch us, instead you chose to disrespect us, you was suppose to make us rough and make sure that we were always mentally tough, instead you chose give up on us and we had no choice but for the streets to raise us. Daddy you know don't nothing positive come out the streets but a sinful lifestyle and some petty beef, we live in the generation where it's a accomplishment to make it to 23.. It's not about you no more it's about us, if you didn't want to deal with us you should have carefully strapped that thing up... Qadar Dwon'

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twistedbeauty

amen

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KingQadarDwon'

Thanks bro

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Poetiq1der

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Powerful insight....Powerful words! Much Respect to you younger Brother.

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Charles2

Probing deep within our consciousness isn't always a pleasant ride. The instruction book in life does not help us if we do not find ourselves within it. All said, we do the best we can ...or just cruising

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