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ElroyKen
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lightness in the dark

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Spoiled Love

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romance

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I am the one that made you feel like that, like a Queen your legs up on my back, when I was worried you put my head in your lap, after all our fights I fell for your trap, let you in everytime, lost in your kiss and your lying, captured by our rythmn and how our bodies intertwine, bent over backwards love is so blind, thought it would get better somewhere in the back of my mind, with love enhancing, taking its toll, your deviousness advancing, making me lose control, you are so fine I would've traded my soul, all for a love I could not hold, yet with you I felt whole, without even this false love this world would be so cold, I planned to get old together, I dreamed of forever, your actions was whatever, I should've knew then never, gave you the benefit of the doubt, you were selfish and unloving I fiqured you out, maybe there is something wrong with me, I always think of the good times and what we could,ve grown to be, look at what you done to me, and still you have my love endlessly,

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T.Christine says:

Love this!

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