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life 1 min read 414 views Mar 28, 2015

Love's Daydream

I glimpsed in a pool this year, you would take the vision as an image of love, it too should be graceful, elusive, tacitcal, moving surely among half-lights of twinkles dim and clear, forced to no course, of no fixed residence, it's only end is it's own swift elegance, what would you say, if you saw what I seen in the same way, that pool heart choked and fevered me, sick blue bubbled green as the chlorine love in a blistful stream a water lilly? I thought I saw far out but doubtless you would prefer to think our love is equal love together, but I want to seek this place that the pool took me to, to ensure our love last forever

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