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Bad Dream

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I dreamt last night, a vivid dream of me, I was in a lost city, Lord have pity, on me and in his mercy I hoped I would be found, but the city was nameless non-stop noises so if I screamed no one would hear a sound, everyone I passed wouldn't stop to talk to me, like I was an alien lost in outer mystery, they eyes stared unaware yet none would approach, I knew then I was in the city of dreams and lost hope, I found myself wandering aimlessly unforgiving trying to cope, I searched far and beyond lost with no where to go, no one to talk to accept God who I knew wouldn't show, suicide was the only way out this was too much enduring pain, I've suffered enough I thought feeling quite deranged, I went to the roof of the tallest building feeling all out of hope, thinking me a nd death have a destiny anyway so it;s time we should elope, I took a deep breath and leaped off falling I awoke,

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ms.poeticpassion says:

Whoa......Good Write
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hymnagen says:

Compelling read!

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