Commitment fulfillments
I'm the head you're the tail, I'm the hammer you're the nail, we're gonna succeed, we ain't gon fail, we got each other , when they bail, we make our own footsteps and leave the trail, for them to follow, here's the motto that we follow, no one comes in between us, that's the promise that we made to The Most Higher Power. I'm the rope you're the tire, IMA keep pulling you, I won't get tired. Your wishes are my desire, my desires light your fires, you like to lift me higher, placing me on pedestals only under AHAYAH. You always telling me kind things and calling me fine names, it's only right that I lace your fingers with a bunch of virtuous rings, call you all virtuous names and to even keep your legacy going I'll offer to be slain because I know that you'll teach our sons about what it takes to be a man... Qadar Dwon'

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Now that's a commitment I'd be willing to make. This poem is ridiculously artistic with such a Powerful message.
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Thank you.You're greatly appreciated! Your comment means a lot.. Great inspiration!
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this is another beautiful piece
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Nice indeed
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another awesome write
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I love this one!!!!
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@Twisted beauty thank you so much.. @bkuedichotomy thank you.. @Ak Rio thanks fam.. I appreciate ya! @scash102 thank you for reading and enjoying
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Let me add to the accolades, my brotha...simply brilliant!
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Excellent!
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