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life 2 min read 390 views Apr 7, 2015

I LOVE YOU

I loved u every since I saw u I was awed..there was a heart stopping pause That opened and locked my jaws Every time u came around U didn't even have to make a sound I was down with making u mine To intertwine until the end of time Through crime through pain Through death through strain From the sun through the rain U just seem to remain Whether broke or rich I was still yo b**** Everyday yo quote was this It doesn't matter I love u So for that I love u too My world was full of drama Although more came with u All the n***** I been through I just don't think I could do without u I say a lot of things that are mean at times But by the time the sun arise Some of it becomes a lie There's not many I can trust U just happened to be the one I can With all these Sons and Daughters lost I think Us is still a good plan However more low key Would be smart if u feel me Cuz anymore madness Honestly would probably kill me My feelings are shaky Sometimes they make me crazy But there's nothing and no one Who makes me feel the way u make me So take this how u want But don't take it as anything but real U f****** with a real B**** Who brought u up out that ditch No n**** will ever be above u And that's the reason why I Love U.

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love_supreme

I like the flow on this one. Excellent write.

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2b2b2

Tight Love Dedication....thanks for sharing!

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hymnagen

I like this. Nice share!

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love_supreme

Very nice

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