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life 2 min read 582 views Apr 11, 2015

Last Time (hold up baby girl just listen)

She called and asked if he could come over and hold her, he said no, I told ya that was the last argument that I was holding. She said please I just wanna talk, I really have to clear my thoughts, he said ok grabs his keys and heads to the car. Before he hangs up, he says this the last time, no more kicking it with me past certain times. Pulls up to the spot, exits his car, heads up the stairs, places two last time knocks, she opens the door, the way she's dressed, she planned on getting her boots knocked and her fancies dropped. They head to the couch, both take a seat trying to figure out each other plots. He said what do you have to say to me after all those hurtful things that you said to me?! She said I'm sorry, I didn't mean it at all, he said that was the last time sweetie that I'll allow you to make me look small.. He said this is my last time on this couch and my last time in this house, don't call or text me anymore because I'm moving on to a different house. She starts to sexually attack him, unpacking his package, if this was the last time she was going to make sure that her mouth and her cat was going to get some action, to cause a reaction from him to make it sound like he was just yapping. She really wants it, so hot she's glowing, he said before we go any further let me put my song on, reaches in his back pocket and told her, here put this Trey Songz on, all excited, she said what song?!, he said put on The last time and when we finish I'll bounce in the morning. Startled look on her face, she just got a taste of what a strong man will no longer take. This was the last time, no longer his present, she became his past times, and they made love for the last time.. King Qadar Dwon'

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Cool story...Peace

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KingQadarDwon'

Thanks my brother... I really appreciate that.. Peace

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