“Trying To Reach Space”

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just different 1 min read 667 views Apr 28, 2015

Excuse Me Mr. Officer

where some of us are actually law abiding

but you all feel you want to keep deciding

our fate

I only strive to be great

but we can't accelerate or achieve

when visitors stand at our wake

and so we still believe we can make that difference

the struggle for us is real enough and so my hands stay consistent

their up in the air

with no intentions to be resistant

these same hands may one day save your life

I wish I can just wrap them around the neck of the black male stereotype

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EmpressRee

*snap* *snap* as melanin rich ppl we need to start first with how we present ourselves. Its not a form of being week but its about being Proud of who we are. The low pants wearing, no clothes wearing thing has got to pass. I love this piece. thank you for sharing

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EmpressRee

*weak (I apologize for the incorrect spelling)

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DallasCowgirl

Well said

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