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ElroyKen
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lightness in the dark

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Wondering

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romance

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I wonder if she feel  how I hope I make her feel, I wonder if she feel as real as she makes me feel, I wonder if I am that one like she is my one, I wonder if I am her earth like she is my sun, if she needs me in life like I can't live without her in mines, I wonder if she feels this time, I wonder if she knows she is the reason to rhyme, without her I can't shine, like like the stars with no twinkles, I wonder if she feel as beautiful as I see her, as she walks all these other wemen wanna be her, her courage took strength I wonder if she knows how strong she makes me, complimenting this man with her womanhood she makes me, something about her patience brings calm, only wanting to keep her from harm, and forever hold her in my arms, I wonder if she feels like the females feel when they are singing praises about they man, if not, hope she can make me understand, what it takes to take a woman to them heights, show her new sights, broaden her horizions help her take flight, hold her through the day and love her through the night, I wanna be the object of her grace, but I am wondering does she know with that look on her face,

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