“Trying To Reach Space”

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just different 1 min read 631 views Apr 28, 2015

Keeping The Faith

arthritis and money diets

lumbar support and short patience

a toll on my role in my martial relation

at times I'd rather be in sedation and separation

continuous efforts to strive

wanna soar past the point at just being alive

still in hope the big showboat dreams

the limelight jet flights and a showcase life

countless cream

I'm growing older still storming the weather

working to expand the portfolio and folder

seems like everlasting endeavors

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EmpressRee

we keep going and going with hopes to reach these dreams. every step forward we get shoved 2 back. but we keep pushing and taking bigger steps next time. persistence. Thanks for sharing

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mrmelody7

Thinking man poetry really enjoyed the line wanna soar pass the point at just being alive good write

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The Immortal Wize

Keep on keeping on my brother!!!

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