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just different 1 min read 615 views Apr 30, 2015

He Loves me...He Loves me not...

What does it take to win your love? It's like begging to give my heart away, but knowing i can't cause his heart is still yours. Lies i hear to cover up your tracks Feelings i feel cause i know you will never love me back He loves me...He loves me not... At times you held me at night which made my heart burst on sight There are times when you smile at me thats it causes my legs to chill Forgetting about the pain that kills but in a way it heals the heart He loves me...He loves me not... Sometimes it scares me to know i could nevee be first What kills me is how you don't care that it hurts You waited for the right time to walk out of my life Despite my struggle i know I'll never be right He loves me...He loves me not..

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LP45

Nice work braymay88. Welcome to the vibe.

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braymay88

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Very well crafted.

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Deeep

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