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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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bloodstreams like melted ice cream

on the grounds of a crime scene

dope fiends having dope dreams

shadows in the night heard screaming

dangerous crossing to the other side

of the street to get something to eat

where there use to be a tree standing

with piles of glass from broken bottles

underneath from a childhood game

that kept us entertained while coping

with things that could not be explained

like the tragedy of too many casualties

of war in the streets where innocent

blood is splattered at the intersection

going in and out of the wrong direction

the world don't need a motherless child

a child don't need a fatherless world

there is no living hope for a boy & girl

who have already died in their mind

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love_supreme says:

These are true words. Excellent write.
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mlowe5 says:

Great write, Wize Dom. Indeed, its time for us to resurrect our minds and rise up from the grave of mis-direction---and rebuild our communities through mothering and fathering that which is ours; and come to full understanding that indeed: "...a child don't need a motherless world/there is no living hope for a boy

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