“Trying To Reach Space”

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just different 1 min read 564 views May 5, 2015

I Am My Biggest Obstacle

and so I continue to try to compromise, rationalize lies

the backslide dived out of retirement

surrounded by this dramatized environment

my walk with God in a state of suspension

still in efforts to do my part with no harmful intentions

the devil in support of my double standards

disrupting my courtship with my Chief In Commander

reminiscent on my days of being a philanderer

para toe my travel

crooked course on the gravel

blessings at a standstill

I got confessions I need to dump in the landfill

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2b2b2

Tight Work....ONE

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love_supreme

"the devil in support of my double standards" - BOOM!. Very nice. Excellent write.

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DallasCowgirl

Very nice!

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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