“Trying To Reach Space”

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just different 1 min read 551 views May 12, 2015

The Brainstorm

wrestling in word baths

my other half interrupting my rough draft

stuffed from the buffet earlier in the day I smashed the glutton button

in search of a topic ascending to a category three from a topic

she hadn't much conversation from me

brain in a whirlwind of debris

tv is on the news

another zimmerman feud

head is in a scatter

haven't yet as much as a pattern

laying horizontal with an aching abdominal

this water tasting absolutely phenomenal

it's late

I'll tuck and get warm

wait for the storm to end

and than try again

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