“Trying To Reach Space”

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just different 1 min read 580 views May 13, 2015

And That Was Then

this current life, these restless nights

these dreams to fufill, this present standstill

if I had listened to mama

the forty acres and a lama might have been closer

opportunities wasted

procastinated and prolonged

cremated and long gone

disobeying authorities

delaying my blessings and aborting my priorites

learned lessons today

 positive influence, maturity, came a long way

in pursuance of my dreams

through with the vent and the steam

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