“Trying To Reach Space”

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just different 1 min read 494 views May 13, 2015

Off To Camp

head in my lap, no turning back

it's a rap now, I threw up my right hand with a vow

unfamilliar territory,unsure of what was ahead

 I heard about killer stories, ammo, led, and camo

humiliated from the strip search prior

this trip felt like firery hell, I had a desire to bail

water leaking out my pores, so hot

the seats felt like melting pots

we came to a roaring stop, forty bodies at drop

at no definite leisure, an evacuation at a six second proccedure

 

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