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just different 1 min read 586 views May 13, 2015

Church Today

fashion show, runway Sunday

 

the whispers, the strippers in the choir

 

the deacons desire

 

the aisles, red carpet parades

 

ushers but pimps on the weekdays, wild youth

 

its just the sad truth

 

the Bishop's office, drug dealers market

 

that's why the first lady is in the mercedes

 

the same tradition exhibition

 

the front row Holy Ghost Show

 

so sanctified, hands waving like a tide, misusing

 

the tithes worldwide

 

today's church is so foul, rather sit in a burning bush

 

me God and my trials

 

 
 
 

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LP45

Omg, a sad truth this is with some churches. Great imagery too. Keep writing. Good one.

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You whipped out a blade and cut deep with this open face truth. Love it!

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