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just different 1 min read 417 views May 14, 2015

Oneness

On this night, I mentally submerged into an ocean:.

Floated on possibilities, stroked thru ripples of worry. When I willed myself still... I sank into the wonders of the precious present moment... Captivated and overflowing with fascination, I then understood what interested me the most... That is I. 

The great complexity of the soul... The light and gentle 

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mlowe5

Great imagery of the water of life. Nice read.

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2b2b2

Superb Flowing Expression.....ONE

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BoRhyme

Yes, great imagery, great work as well!!

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BlueDichotomy

Vivid

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love_supreme

Very nice

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