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"VISUALLY JUDGED"

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THERE IS SOMETHING SUSPICIOUS ABOUT HER

THE WAY SHE HANGS HER HEAD, HER FLOW OF HAIR.

CONFIDENCE IS QUESTIONABLE,

BUT THERE IS A RAY OF ELEGANCE THAT CAN HIDE

THE SLIGHTEST BIT OF INSECURITIES.

BUT WHY IS CONFIDENCE QUESTIONED BY THE DIRECTION

 IN WHICH SHE LOOKS,

 EVEN THE HIGHEST OF SCHOLARS ANGLES

THEIR FLOW OF POSTURE IN A POSITION SUITABLE

 FOR THEIR INDIVIDUAL APPEARANCE.

LOOKING UP CONSISTENTLY CAN GIVE HER A

 BETTER VIEW OF HER SURROUNDINGS,

BUT EVEN THE BRIGHTEST OF IDEAS HAVE COME FROM

A SLIGHT TILT OF MEDITATION.

INSECURITIES IS NOT MEASURED BY POSTURE OR ANGLE,

BUT OF ACTION AND CHOICE OF SPEECH.

BE CAREFUL IN SAYING “HOLD YOUR HEAD UP,

 LOOK ME IN THE EYE”

THERE IS MUCH INTIMIDATION IN

THE EYES OF HER ENDURANCE

AS SHE FOCUSES HER HEAD FORWARD,

HER ACCOMPLISHMENTS PERMEATES THROUGH HER

QUINTESSENTIAL RESILIENCE.

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COMMENTS

 

KingQadarDwon' says:

Awesome write... Thanks for sharing
 

hymnagen says:

I dig this reminder...quick impressions don't reveal much, we have to dig deeper to see true character.
 

mrmelody7 says:

float on with your positive writes real is real as can be being oneself is being real

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HumbleMeeksInFloetry4 says:

I Humbly Thank and Appreciate You All!!!! You All Are Extremely Talented, Thank You All for sharing your thoughts
 

BoRhyme says:

Great work!!!!
 

HumbleMeeksInFloetry4 says:

Thank you very very much :) I Appreciate You All!
 

2b2b2 says:

BRILLIANCE.....Write On
 

Charles2 says:

your observations are truly refreshing. this particular write takes me inside my head in reflection to see from the inside out.

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HumbleMeeksInFloetry4 says:

I TRULY AM THANKFUL AND HUMBLY APPRECIATE YOU ALL TAKING THE TIME TO READ MY WORK AND EXPOUND ON WHAT YOU RECEIVE FROM IT, WE ALL HAVE THIS GIFT OF FLOETRY FROM GOD AND I OFFER A MILLION TIMES MORE STRONGER PROPS TO THE FLOETRY YOU ALL PRODUCE OVER MY OWN! YOU ALL INSPRIRE ME AND I THANK YOU :-)
 

latin_lover says:

Excellent write.

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