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Genesis (Time and Patience) KQD version chapter 1 1-14

 

1 In the beginning, after foundations of the earth were set, the fowls of the air, the beast of the field, the fish of the Sea, every living creature, and every living plant were formed, Yah created Man and Woman on that historic 6th Day.

  2 He named man "Time" and he named woman "Patience". Those two were destined to meet but they lived in different places.

 3 They lived on two separate islands divided by love and kindness, in search of true love, to find it, their islands they had to combine them.

  4 "Time" had to pray time and time again to find an help meet after his many lonely days of working by himself on his island. The Most High told time that in due time you'll find it, display "Patience" and self-control and my son you'll surely find it.

 5 "Patience" was on her island gardening and crying, she kept praying to the father for a "Time" period of love to surely find her.

 6 She wanted to be loved and hugged and to be called beautiful all of the "Time" and to rejoice and bear fruits with the man of "Time".

 7 Satan surfaced but he was in the form of a whale and told "Patience" to speed up the process of her "Time",because if she continued to wait "Time" will surely die.

 8 "Patience" rebuked the whale and told him that "Time" is infinite and that it's heaven sent, she'll wait for ages before she becomes disobedient to the Master of Magnificence.

 9 It was now time that "Time" was to make his way to the other Island after all of his years of dedication and displaying "Patience" plus being obedient to the Master of Creation.

  10 The creator summoned the whale to Take "Time" to the Island of "Patience" so that he can finally see an identical creation that has his same animations and features for future creations for the uninhabited places.

 11 "Time" finally meets "Patience". He tells her that there is a "Time and a place for everything and that one of the fruits of the spirit is "Patience".

  12 "Patience told "Time that time is timeless and that she would have waited another 20 years for the man called "Time" to finally find her.

 13 The Omnipresent creator allowed an tsunami to hit the waters to join the two islands together in holy matrimony. "Patience" and "Time" joined their animals, plants, their love, and all of their possessions together and became fruitful and multiplied and eventually gave birth to an island and a generation full of Angels.

  14 The whale who was satan was salty and blew out water out of his blowhole every time that "Time" and "Patience" kissed.

 

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2b2b2

Excellent Work....well woven....thanks for sharing....ONE

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KingQadarDwon'

Thanks my brother...much respect to you and your power of Great inking! You keep me inspired... Salute to the Mayor

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LP45

A perfect blend of flow and imagery. Great work here KQD. Thank you for sharing. Peace!

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mlowe5

A true Griot you are, my Brother. Thanks for sharing this well woven write---beautifully constructed with so much powerful imagery that gave me tears of joy: Time and Patience! May The Most High continue to impregnate the womb of your poetic mind. Peace, Love

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KingQadarDwon'

Thank you all so much.... I feel so honored to be blessed by all of you great and magical poets feedback... That inspires me...

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