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G.Moore
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End Game

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Funny how the clouds sees my eyes 

Dark abysses centered in muddy water

Opaque reflections mirror us endlessly 

Stillness of waves provides the stiff cardinal reality at 

The capital of my brain which is my mind's eye, the

Frequencies cover revealed sight 

Radiant sun mimics the portrait of

Suddenly I awake looking upward and eye see you

Eyes water endlessly at the sight of you 

 

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shadchan says:

feels like a beautiful awakening.

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DallasCowgirl says:

Always taken by your words, bro. Had to read it backwards to understand its meaning. Thank you for inspiring me.

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G.Moore says:

Thank you both for reading and sharing your feelings for what you read. You both were spot on with your assessments of the awakening and reading it backwards. Although End Game is one of my shortest pieces I enjoyed putting it together because I astrally viewed myself putting it together in a space that revealed more than I could understand at that moment. The answer to the title lies within the final stanza
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2b2b2 says:

Brilliant....some mind you got there brah....always enjoy....Write On....ONE

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