mrmelody7
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CATEGORY
life
Got this crazy idea I
can sit in the wooded yard
trying to catch night slip in
In vain I wait and wait as
day slowly turn to dark
Try to catch the exact moment
when darkness just take over
Tree line begin to get a different
color of green as night creeps
on in
Once again always overwhelmed damn
when did it get dark again
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2b2b2 says: Ha ha.....yeah that dark can creep up on ya.....Tight Capture...thanks for sharing....(good to read ya, my friend)! |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you as always number one commentator friend indeed you are number one commenttatorpoems by this commentor |
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LP45 says: Great write mrmelody, lol, I agree with 2b2b2, that darkness will creep up on you when you least expect it. Write on my friend! |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you Ladypoet45 appreciate your write on with the write on |
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tinesia30 says: lol you crazy. This started my day. |
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mrmelody7 says: You crazt get that a lot since I was a kid, love to hear the southern ladies in their sweet southern accent "You so sill-lee thanks for your comment |
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