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just different 2 min read 806 views Nov 11, 2015

O.P.P. (Other Peoples' Poetry)


Cloudy  Minds,  try  to  define  personal  Imprints

Lost  in  mental  storms,  no  tracks,  fore  gone,  concluding

Performed    for  ears,  premiering  thoughts  in  newness  

Spitting  in  bars,  spotlighting  skill  and  savvy….reality

Paying  attention,  I  patronize  artists’  walks  thru  stage  life

Amazed  at  the  homage  of  someone  or  something, reminiscing

Freestyles’  given  as  advice,  others  tell  stories,  all  remind  me  of  glory

In  relation  to  my  very  own  dream-chasing,  not  so  coincidentally

Oft  times,  heard  underground, or  as backstage,   fresh  on  the  dome  raw

I  roam  the  sheets  and  check  the  screens  for  one  more  verse

Hitting  me  hard, like  sledge-hammers  to  corns,  blood  is  drawn

Telling  tales  personally,  discreetly  yet  loudly  flashing  before  my  mind

Heart  and  souls  sing out  ovations  of  clarity,  as  equally  as  disparity

 I  stop,  look  and  listen,  often  finding  tools  to  use  in  my   own  missions

Catching  tears  that  fall  from  other  scribes,  by  disguise,  cleansing  insight

Mentally  conversing  on  my  personal  flights,  thru  highs  and  the  lows

No  fault,  so  need  to  pre-suppose,  just  letting  the  pupils  expose

Relating  and  pertaining,  to  entertaining,  maybe  even  constraining

I  got  to  give  props,  where  props  is  due,  by  dropping  a  remark  for  you

Thank  you  for  sharing…….and  this  means  you  too,  as  there  is  no  best,  just  another  life  changing  journey,  spelled  and  spun  in  O.P.P. …….Other  Peoples’ Poetry!

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LP45

Awesome work my friend! Beautifully presented! Bravo and bows to you.

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hymnagen

The last time I visited PV I was perturbed by negative judgment of others craft. It wasn't the first time. I agree wholeheartedly with this write, bruh. Everyone who spills of themselves spills something of value. All may not like it, but none may invalidate it base upon ones own opinions. Thanks for this share. It was needed. #Salute

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mrmelody7

A great write number one commentator words a flowing like always BTW I have a family member who likes to use the system OPM other people money

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Charles2

powerful in a quiet calming focused way... This with a clarity which is as easy to read as it is to understand. excellent

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mrmelody7

Number one commenttator I read this 3 times really like how you broke this down all the way down

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love_supreme

This is another one of your classics.

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2b2b2

Thanks much ladypoet45 (winks)

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2b2b2

I am and will always rally for the underdog my astute brother hymnagen, no better nor no worse, just another verse thrown into the collective for perpetual remembering....thanks ONE

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2b2b2

Thanks mrmelody7 for the time, much appreciated and respected and I to have relatives trying to use the OPM system...lol

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2b2b2

Thanks kindly latin_lover....ONE

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Lovelylady1

Wow! First time reading your work, now I'm a fan! Loved the flow my dear king!

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mlowe5

Great feedback Teacher! We fellow Poets are blessed and honored to have you in our midst. I am just happy being a member of all the {Poetry Vibe Family. What a beautiful mosaic field of God given creativity. Thanks for this--another--powerful share. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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minayaJ

Nice enjoyed it

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mlowe5

Again, I feel blessed that you, 2b2b2, continues to be a blessed moment in my life. Peace and Love.

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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