“This latest poem - I am just not sure -the message is sound but it starts a bit odd - ah who am I kidding I am eccentric ”
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Drive by
hide away
its just another get away
dont get shot from behind
my life forever on the line
can this be my time
the knife
in the back
of my past regression
many regret their elusive profession
in this rappers lullaby
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Join free Log inmrmelody7
Great observations only thing missing need to be read
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nice work keep pushing
Read Ak Rio's poemshymnagen
Cautionary tales always needed. This is no exception
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I like this poem.
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