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life 2 min read 789 views Dec 4, 2015

Re writing Hopelessness(Divine takeover Hope)

 

Reaching for milestones of lows with millstones tied around their necks,

 it's become a way of life for the lost found members of the black nation to accept poverty and a second class citizenship

 when they were created to always be first class.

  Using all dark colored crayons to paint the future, no hope in better days because the days are the way that they are because someone handed them those crayons and they never questioned why,

 but can tussle with their brother if he accidentally looks at him for too long.

  When another ethnicity stares for an extended period,

  the hopeless one tucks his tail in between his legs and put his head down in shame,

 very opposite of the warrior being that he frightened his brother with.

  So to feel good about himself he rushes to alcohol and drugs and mentally and physically abuses and disrespect young queen prospects and stunt their growth in their quest to be royalty,

 the person that grandmother envisioned for her grand baby.

  Another hopeless statistic of a minority male that has shattered the black woman,

 creator of nations.

 Hopelessness has Broken all of their twigs before they even reached a quarter of a century in age. Now they are no longer attracted to the very nature in which they were created to create life and future families.

  Divine guidance is present now,

 Angels are walking now, The Angels are talking now to the minority males to re write history again

  because it's that time again, every 25,000 years a new script is written,

 so that means a new holy book with some future scriptures in it and some brand new predictions.

  With the Angels help and a new found knowledge and hope,

 The once hopeless and timid minorities are now standing up to police once again, proud of being black once again and making no excuses about it,

  new cycles, natural order, natural foods, Natural appearances, protecting the queens and implementing order of morals and respect, Now keeping spirituality intact.

  Girls are becoming Queens and Boys are becoming Kings.

 That's prophecy.

  Because the once hopeless realized that their people would become extinct and only get read about and get dugged up like the Mayans and the ancient Egyptians, at least they were remembered for some wonders, we would have only been known for twerking and toting pistols, nothing realistic.

  Qadar Dwon'

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DallasCowgirl

This should be featured. One of the most important pieces I've read in a while. This is very crucial for our generation and the generations that we bring up. I really enjoyed reading this, from beginning to end. Thanks for sharing and spreading hope to our people.

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amin901

Good work Qadar Dwon.One of the best if not the best ive read on here.Very well expressed and great awareness.Keep inspiring

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mrmelody7

Lookin quite the Rev very good write sir, look out T D jakes

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kingqadardwon'

I would like to extend a special thank you to all of you wonderful poets... I really cherish y'all feedback.. Y'all keep me inspired... Nothing but peace and blessings

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mlowe5

Yes Sir! Continue to teach from that pregnant poetic mind that The Most High has impregnated you with. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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LP45

Absolutely stunning. This was a great read QD. Every line envisioned and felt. Thank you for sharing the truth in its purest form.

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love_supreme

Very nice

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