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Chocolate Dreams

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Wrapped all up in candy coated dreams,

 surrounded by nothing but dark chocolate minus the cream.

  I want to swim in the cocoa colored seas

  and live the way that our chestnuts and our cinnamons lived before the siege

  of the Romans, the crusaders and the British breeze.

  The invasion of the creams came with new realities,

  frozen tears and hearts broken like beams.

 They schemed and ruined dreams of the finest bronze teams,

  only to place their visions and deliver Africa's finest chocolate over the Atlantic seas

 to build on bloody tepees

 of a closely related people.

  Blood mixed with chocolate, tasted so awful

  but it was quite delicious for the ones who loved the taste, sight, and smell of blood.

  Laughed at the deaths and picnics or should Pick-A- N¡99@ events

 that took place, because some of the righteous bonbons had something to say

 about the way that they were being treated,

  never had nothing,

 pillows for our walnut fathers and mothers was once made of hay and a whole families of royal bloodlines lived in shacks and sheds,

 the domestic animals lived better and even was better fed.

  Raped and scraped, torn so emotionally,

  the mothers could never call a melanated man a King

 again because of actual playing out of the scriptures in the testament of the courtesy of Willie Lynch

 ... So they prayed to the one living God as they laid to one day receive justice for an undeserved hatred from so called American patriots.

 Losing moral excitement for every non indictment, even though the evidence was clear as lightning, same trend still follows 460 years later,

  these people never even had the slightest change in their behavior,

 it's just their nature,

 To feed on Chocolate, grab that snicker, hungry why wait?!

  How much will it take?!

 For the World's finest Chocolate to finally awake and separate from the things that makes the soil fade away.

  We should know what's at stake,

 only a fool would bake a cake, and give it away,

  to the ones who'll take credit for it after they praise you for a day..

  It's now or never, I'm reporting live from waste deep water trapped in a poet's lake..

 waiting for every piece of candy that look like me to come save me and if it isn't all of the diaspora chocolate Gods just let me drown. I'm brave because of the pain and of the tears and screams that I hear in my dreams... KingQadarDwon'

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The Immortal Wize says:

The mic is rolling around on the floor, you just shut it down. I love our rich chocolate history.

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kingqadardwon' says:

Thank you Wize!.... I love my people and our unlearned past so much that I speak it into existence
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mlowe5 says:

Truly spoken with excellence. You/We shall not drown my Brother; nor shall Our Chocolate melt away. Thanks for this beautiful, well crafted read. Peace and Love, M. Lowe5.
 

mrmelody7 says:

Always seeing the big picture of things not about the totat
 

mrmelody7 says:

Always seeing the big picture of things not about the totality of me wonderful informative write as always

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Thank you SIR! Thanks for coming in the water for me and my people..... I appreciate you as always
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Kingqadardwon' says:

Thank you my brother @Mrmelody7... It's always a pleasure to receive your feedback
 

Poetiq1der says:

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Hey there younger Brother! This was a fabulous piece of Art. I loved your metaphorical usage, I loved your meter, I loved the composition, I loved your directed mindset, and most of all....I loved the message, and meaning....1 Love/Peace

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