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The Immortal Wize

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If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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She Shell, not

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she don't like me no more
she don't write me no more
text messages, that are so
misinterpreted, misspelled 
words that miss the mark
like a chaperone pushing
us apart, she says, she's
done, I'm burned to a crisp
I've had enough fire to last
me a life time, she wrote
the ticket, I paid the fine
she snatched off the seashell  
wrapped around her wrist
 flung it into the abyss
threatened to hit me 
in the face with her fist
 the swing was a miss
 I dipped out of it
sure wish I, got a kiss
had a snickers, so I
 settled for that instead
what's the use in trying
to fix a flat, without a jack
omg...I'm going to be sick
trying to concentrate on
the thickness of all this
drummed up drama
zero's and commas 
flick of the...where's the bracelet?
I said ...it was flung in the abyss

 

 

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hymnagen says:

I digz the title. Love how this captures how fast things can go south on misunderstandings

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