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miss_chaniel
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Something love never taught

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We have been taught 
           Love is beautiful 
     Love is seen 
         Love is forever 
     Love is unique 
But what about the ugliness 
    When love isn't so attractive 
When love isn't a magnet 
When we indecisive 
Should we stay or should we go 
When our heart  and mind in battle 
   When No longer in control 
We look for answers in others
  Knowing we no the answers to 
We have been taught 
      Love is beautiful 
     Love is seen 
         Love is forever 
     Love is unique 
But what about ugliness 
When we have  peel back 
    The layers  to discover  
What's underneath 
When love is quicksand 
We can't control our feet 
When love is hard to come by 
When the love we want isn't who we need 
We have been taught Love is beautiful 
     Love is seen 
         Love is forever 
     Love is unique 
What about ugliness ?

 

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scash102 says:

Absolutely REAL! I love this poem n I have definitely been there. Excellent art.

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Corey says:

Unfortunately love can be bittersweet as you piece clearly expressed. Its the misuse and abuse of a beautiful thing that makes it ugly. a sting many have felt. Nice write, TFS!
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2b2b2 says:

Fantastic Scribe and Thought....Love is in the journey (expres-sion)....not just a destination (I wouldn't have it any other way, even the hurt and pain....love remains above all these things) Bravo....Namaste

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Kharisma says:

Truth in your words. Nobody likes to explain the ugly side, because they want us to travel to that side on our own.

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