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my silent tears will fade away
this distance is hard to take
harsh realties
wrapping me in chains
selfish if was true to be told
for me to keep you
with my heart and soul
your happiness is
what matters most
I will wish you the best
secretly hoping
for your heart to never go
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Hello Kavindra, I can relate to the give and pull of letting love go, while secretly hoping it chooses to stay. A sad, yet beautifully expressed piece!
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Love loss and love gained; both share similar pain. As I read this my emotions my thoughts swayed from sad to happy to sad. Thanks for sharing. ..
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Excellent write.
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