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just different 1 min read 803 views Apr 11, 2016

Melt

Imagining peaceful settings
I can usually place myself there
Rendering myself calm and laissez-faire
And temporarily without care

Repetition of a word
A mantra if you will
Tends to make me still
and deliriously tranquil

Then there are those times when my mind 
is muddled from the hand I've been dealt
it is then when I have to dig deeper
And command myself to melt

I initially envision myself starting to drip
until I progressively liquefy
And lately I've been pondering the types of liquid
I can turn into before I solidify

I could be cinnamon tea
a spicy medicinal brew
Or leave a tangy sweet after taste
from the juice of mango or honey dew

I could be rain...a brief spring shower
that those lovers can saunter in
Suddenly I downpour...Watch them splash, giggle
and dash towards shelter amid the thunderous din

Perhaps the salty sweat 
from strenuous, sultry, salutations
Or the joyful tears
from such soul stirring sensations

What if I was a swift stream
that flows into a river's rippling wake
Expanding into a sapphire sea, widening into
an onyx ocean, oh the excursions I could take...

But I've solidified again

Oh well...
There's always next time...

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Kingqadardwon'

Outstanding write! Thanks for sharing

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Poetunleashed

Wow great read and a well written pieace

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Woven

You humble me, kingqadardwon', thank you very much.

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Woven

Thank you very much, I appreciate your comment and support, Poetunleashed.

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corey

Omg, each verse I read I thought, wow I love this and then I loved the next even more... your entire poem had me thrilled! Excellent write!

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Woven

My goodness, your response has humbled me Corey, especially coming from a writer such as yourself. Thank you, I'm happy it impressed you so.

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mrmelody7

Enjoyed this being a Professional relaxer can easily relate and just love the rain very nice write

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woven

So happy you enjoyed, MrMelody7, thank you very much.

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LyricalMorphine

love your wordplay first and the second the sensualness of this all lol ....it calmed me for sure lol

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Woven

Well thank you LyricalMorphine, I'm glad it had that calming effect, lol, appreciated.

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