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Exert to the limit

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I hate being confused . Your happy times seem to go by quicker than they come . Your bad times linger as long as they can . Your hopes and faith are tested while your tears are in possession . Your heart is red , but it's no longer for love . You replace sweet with bitter, feelings with neglect and love for pain ."elders say the young don't know pain . " The young will feel just like the old who remain . We get lost within our veins and confusion fills our brains . Don't tell me you understand until you feel our strain .

-Quanna.H

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The Immortal Wize says:

Fiery Flow, Powerful message. I encourage you to keep on writing ...You're headed in the right direction.

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Shortiiie_q says:

Thank you for the feed back 😁 ,i promise i want give up writing ..lol its a must that i continue

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Ak Rio says:

woowzers thats deep and floetic keep it up $hortie

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