Exert to the limit
I hate being confused . Your happy times seem to go by quicker than they come . Your bad times linger as long as they can . Your hopes and faith are tested while your tears are in possession . Your heart is red , but it's no longer for love . You replace sweet with bitter, feelings with neglect and love for pain ."elders say the young don't know pain . " The young will feel just like the old who remain . We get lost within our veins and confusion fills our brains . Don't tell me you understand until you feel our strain .
-Quanna.H

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Fiery Flow, Powerful message. I encourage you to keep on writing ...You're headed in the right direction.
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Thank you for the feed back 😠,i promise i want give up writing ..lol its a must that i continue
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woowzers thats deep and floetic keep it up $hortie
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I like this poem.
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